I love your voice, with the complete rock contest this song would be great! Little advice for the lyric writing, you can also use very short lines in combination with long ones to emphasize some ideas, but of course, this is personal decision, and depends on what are you looking for. I just wanted to comment it in case that can inspire you in another song :)
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Thank you for the constructive criticism. Traveling alone was written after watching 6 hours of a man with no limbs, drive cross country. It was the first song I wrote after learning how to play....enough guitar to play a song. The part that is unfortunate, is the documentary project never happened.Due to the guy who would be the main focal point, decided not to do it.
Is the rock contest on? I love rock and roll.
Stay steemy
There is a course called "songwriting" that you can find at the www.coursera.org platform. you can sign in for free and then follow all the courses you want, this one is excellent. You can choose to pay for the certificate or just do the course for free without certificate. This course in particular allows you to see the content but not to do the exams if you haven't payed... but you can apply for financial aid and then do the entire course for free! that is what I did, it helped me a lot and I recommend you, I think you will like it :) (I also think I gonna do a post about that, can be helpful for a lot of people)
I also love rock and roll! which artists do you like the most? :D