Hi Steemians!! It has been awhile. I have a new song brewing and you're my favorite people to share with in the raw stage. Will you help me find a song title again? :) xoxo
-Claraty
Lyrics:
Now everywhere I go these days
There's someone yelling words of hate
And everywhere I try to stay
Has me feelin like I gotta get away
Such beauty in the world around
Why do we flip it upside down?
We're acting like a pack of clowns
With our heads hanging low
I used to miss my home in the stars
Can't get there by a boat or a car
Been playing hide and seek with my wings
And they haven't flown in awhile
Child, don't you cry I will hold your head at night
I will hold you head at night
Ooh, if you cry I will hold your head at night
I will hold you head at night
The simplest things are usually true
And take the most courage to see
Nod along and act like a fool
And you'll be just like me
I'm stubborn as a goat at a gate
Sometimes I forget what's at stake
Ego plays some funny games
and I play them too
Will you tell me your tale too?
I wonder if I'll find me in you
We'll fall in love and see new truths
As one
We can't be all that different
I'm feelin I could be your friend
I'll be someone to depend
on
Child, don't you cry I will hold your head at night
I will hold you head at night
Ooh, if you cry I will hold your head at night
I will hold you head at night
Welcome back. Missed you.
awwe thanks, good to be back!
Lovely composition and performance! Nice! How about "Child, Don't You Cry" for a title???
Thank you dear!!
I really like the mood of this tune, very mellow. I also like your voice quality. it seems like you really go for honesty, like displaying your own sound with no pretenses and i dig that. great song. maybe "simplest things"...
I appreciate your feedback :) Thanks for the love! Maybe "simplicity" ?
Probably the simpler the better :)
This is awesome! Hope you don't mind, but I'm "stealing" it for the musical interlude in my Tarot Tuesday post I'm doing for tomorrow.
As for a title, I see the first two that popped in my brain have already been suggested - LOL! My third choice would be, "Child."
haha awesome! "steal" away, I'm honored!! Mm, I kind of like the simplicity of just "Child" too. Thanks!
Coolness, glad you like the title, and the stealing. LOL! And you're very welcome! 😊
Beautiful song :)
Name of the song:
The obvious one: I will hold your head at night.
My personal preference: Goat at the gate.
:)
hahah! goat at the gate. winner. or "I'm a Goat"