Hi steemians
It's Openmic Week 50
Thanks @pfunk and @luzcypher for this contest , I am so glad for playing in Openmic Contest.
I tried to translate it just the way they wrote it In Farsi , but maybe some words doesn't mean in English or they have some other words for it , I wish my translate can have a good meaning , cause in Farsi , they didn't wrote it with easy words ... they used hard words not general words .'
The ways - Eshgh Bazi ( Love Making ) Covered by @DavidFar
Thank you all :))) <3
Farsi Lyrics Pronunciation :
Verse :
Bayad Emshab Ba Saz to
Kook Konam Sa'atamo
ke akhare tarane ham
tamum konam taghatamo
ba avalin bahane ha
pare konam pirhanamo
ba atisho daghe tanet
shole bedam atashamo
ba har labo booseh ye to
sineh ye sangam ab misheh
pooste tanam tala ye narm
ba lamse tost ke nab misheh
shohreh ye afagh misheh baz
shiveh ye eshgh bazie to
makidane shahde to e !
ke mikone har shabo no
Chorus :
jaye rad o pa ye , to too ye ghalbe man
por nemisheh hargez , toee tamame man
kooke tare ghalbam , tare mooye to
tak dalile boodan , boodan kenare tost
English Translation :
Tonight I must set my watch with your tuned instrument
then at the end of my songs I can finish my patience
with first causes , cut my own clothes
with fire and hot from your body , flame my fire
with every buss and kissing you
my stone heart melting
My skin is soft gold
With your touch , it will become pure
again it will become famous at the heavens
the way we do love making
it's sucking your nectar
that makes every nights , new ...
Chorus :
foot print of your footsteps in my heart
it will never fills it , you are all of me
tune of my heart's string is your hair's String
the only reason to be is being near you ...
👏👏👏👏 Encore! I totally enjoyed that Davood! Good one. 👏👏👏👏 Thank you so much for the translation. That made it extra special. 👍😊
many thanks , you are the best @steelygeoff , and it's great to hear the kind words from you :) , I am glad that you enjoyed listening to my work 😊
I think was one of your finest entries thus far, David! Excellent passion-filled song and performance - brilliant!
Thank you brother , that's your kindness , that means much to me .
I Don't understand it but its lively and good music. I did laugh when you frowned hitting a bum note here and there but well done. Very good.
thank you so much , I am glad you enjoyed listening :)
wonderful song, and tune love it.
thank you so much , it's a pleasure :)
Tu eres el cantante! animo
Muchas gracias :) \m/
I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. up-voted and following. 🐝
my pleasure , I do it too , thanks :)
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I really liked the way you sing this song. Very versatile vocals and all your different rhythm sections are flawlessly done. Great job brother.
Peace !!!
I'm so thankful , it's a pleasure , really thanks for your kindness brother :)
peace
A VERY heartfelt song, beautiful singing, and the ending really gave me goosebumps!!
Really thank you my dear friend , it's so great to hear your kind words on my work :)
What beautiful lyrics you fell in love with;
at first I did not understand you at all lol
then I read in English
Where are you from?
thank you so much
I am from Iran
It's a song from an Iranian rock band but the band separated and the vocalist left the band ,
nice song, specially i like the lyrics@davidfar.
thank you so much , it's written by Kaveh Afagh
ahh ... regardless of our cultures. believe me without offense but it is difficult to see a man from Iran be romantic. the media sells us other men of course this is not squeaky .... but well I hope you never change your ramanticism .. 😊
@cajalias7 thanks , If you can tell me how they show us in media I will be glad , cause I wanna know about it and then I will answer :) , you dont know what they do to us , they just can ban Iran , close all the doors on Iranians, that's what they do , first Apple sent email to Iranian app producers and told them we have to ban your products because of USA government rule , and also google play removed Iranian Apps for no reason , those poor engineer , and also the other companies started to doing this to us , thanks Steemit , it's still free to whole world , don't believe media
Wao. .Wao. I did not know that.
lyrics good song ,, i like this song you are a great musician @davidfar
thank you so much brother
thank you luzcypher <3
This sounds pretty damned rad man, loved it.
man , when you say this , I feel great , thank you so much brother :)
Thank you for the awesome performance.
Lyrics are quite romantic. You sing and play good. I think the title matches with the Hindi words of 'Ishq Baazi,' meaning is same. Maybe these words were taken from Farsi.
yes , its Ishq Baazi , thank you so much for your kind words brother , sure because all these countries were connected to each other in past we have some equal words in our languages and some have more equal words , Iran , India , Pakistan , Afghanistan , Uzbekistan , Tajikistan .
nice to meet you bro :)
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