open mic week # 64 original song creation own (lyric indonesia)

in #openmic7 years ago

Hello!, this is my entry for openmic songwriters challenge

maybe this is my first openmc in @steemit this is because I just know from my friend @ indrameong
this is a big challenge for me,
where my voice is very fals and in fact I am not a singer and guitarist but a drummer.

but it's okay this is something new and interesting to me: D: D
yes my teammates can pay for themselves !!!
and maybe for the future I will fix it
in terms of vocals and videos ..

and lyrics this song my creation:

mentari pagi menyapa
tak seperti biasa
mungkinkah ada jawabnya
kan satu cerita

morning sun greet
not as usual
Could there be an answer
one story

ku masih terjaga
dalam bayang cinta
masih terbaring hampa
ternyata kau telah tiada

I'm still awake
in the shadow of love
still lying empty
you are gone

mungkinkah kau kan
kembali disini
kembali mengisi hati yang sepi

Could it be you
back here
back to fill a lonely heart

ooo kau telah pergi
tinggalkan aku
bersama luka
di palung hatiku

ooo have you gone
leave me
with the wound
in the trough of my heart

haruskah ku terus berlari
menikmati mimpi
yang tak pernah pasti

should I keep running
enjoying dreams
which is never certain

I hope you like it!

Til my next post!

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beautiful its her post you i like, upvote my account

orang mana bro ?

indonesia bro, you guys

Upvote yes

good job bro

lanjutkan bang karya y. sukses selalu