Steemit OpenMic week 50 - (Original Song) "Don't Let Me Win"

in #openmic7 years ago (edited)

I had to skip a week of OpenMic, but I couldn't wait to jump back on the ship for week 50...

Coming through with an original song, "Don't Let Me Win". This one means a lot to me, and I shared the lyrics below if anyone would like to follow.. perhaps you can relate ;) It comes from a place of personal awareness and honesty - a tough, yet beautiful thing to embrace.

Cheers Friends xo

DON'T LET ME WIN - "Running From Myself" ep (Dec. 2016)

"Running from a ghost
Looking back, there's no one there
Running from myself
Everyday, no one else

I see your patience
I feel your love and grace
It's all around me
Below and up above
I wanna tell you I need you
Show you just how I feel
But I'm gonna fight it like crazy
Please don't let me win
Don't let me win

Clouds keep rolling in
So hard to make a change
Easier to stay in that same familiar place
Even though it's not right
You know it's not right
You know it's not right

I wanna tell you I need you
Show you just how I feel
But I'm gonna fight it like crazy
Please don't let me win
Don't let me win"

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👏👏👏👏 You know that feeling when you know within the first few bars that you like a song... I am there. That's a great song and you have a great voice, as I am sure you will have been told already! 😊 I also love the suspended chord (almost) throughout the verses. Good one! 👍

Glad to have caught ya in the beginning! ;) Thanks for the thoughtful comment.. this is one if my favorite songs so it's nice to know it's resonating with someone else ✌🏼

OMG, beautifull song and a Beautifull voice!

🙏🏻 thank you @laizaqc

Quite a beautiful song "K" - Love the "ohh-ohh" hooks - the whole melody and feel is so deep and captivating - and the lyrics are wonderful!... PS. I hope he didn't let you win... :-)

Ohhh thanks! Glad you paid attention to the lyrics, as they actually have meaning :) ✌🏼 P.s. Still trying to win lol

Lovely song @kjablonski .
UV and Following
Cheers,
Bucky

Thanks Bucky! Following you as well 😊

Eres hermosa y tienes excelente voz bonita cancion

muchas gracias 😊