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RE: Open Mic Songwriters Challenge: A vulnerable song about losing my sister (Theme: Till We Meet Again)

in #openmic7 years ago

"How I went back to sleep and pretended to keep
Everything still intact in a warm summer dream"

For anyone who has ever lost someone.
You've captured that in-between feeling.

But you've given the memory of your sister life.
Thank you for sharing this!