This is my very first entry into this open mic contest with a song i wrote myself called "One last day" I hope i have the same love this couple had right to the very end <3
One Last Day Lyrics:
Verse 1:
If i only had one more day i know what i'd do
I'd think of all the memories that i spent with you
Time it goes so slowly when you want it to
So if i only had one last day
I'd spend it all with you
Chorus:
Laying under the stars
Feeling safe in your arms
Painting pictures in the sand
Always being hand in hand
Now the years have turned us grey
I remember our hayday
Memories of when we met
Our first kist i wont forget
Verse 2:
If i only had one one more breath
In that last breath i would say
I'd tell that i love you
Before i slipped away
Your love it completes me
I know our love is true
So if i only had one last breath
I'd use it up for you
Chorus:
Laying under the stars
Feeling safe in your arms
Painting pictures in the sand
Always being hand in hand
Now the years have turned us grey
I remember our hayday
Memories of when we met
Our first kist i wont forget
Verse 3:
If i only had one more day
I know what i'd do
I'd think of all the memories
That i spent with you
Time it goes so slowely
When you want it to
So if i only had one last breath
I'd use it up for you
Thanks so much for listening
~ Melissa Kellie Xx
your vibrato sounds so natural and clean, @melissakellie, and you voice lends weight and feeling to your lyric gorgeously.
most enjoyed that finger picking pattern and the melody flourishes you wrote in to the intro and transitions, pleasant chord choices - you can definitely hear ed sheeren in your guitar writing!
Thank you for sharing the gorgeous original with the world.
Thank you so much @carmalain7 it was really nice chatting to you the other day :)
Hey Melissa,
I've got two things to say:
Also, I am new to steem and thought I would share my story content. I assume you would enjoy the thrill of reading it.
Regards-
Jay Mehta
Aw thanks so much i'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Good one :)
Thank you Xx
Woow what a nice song and amazing voice =)
That's really what we call talent, a talent that I do not have hehe ..
You did great @melissakellie Keep it up =)
Love,
@micch
You have a great voice, keep up the great work!
I try to enter every week so check mine if you get the time.
https://steemit.com/openmic/@jarradlevi/steemit-open-mic-week-74-or-or-cover-song-what-a-catch-donnie-by-fall-out-boy-performed-by-jarradlevi
Aw thanks heaps for your kind words @micch <3
You are very much welcome @melissakellie ..
You sing and play the guitar so beautifully. This is truly mesmerizing. And what an excellent song. So poetic and well written. You really have such an amazing talent, Melissa. You're a star in the making. Brilliant job! Well done! ^_^
Aw thank you that it is really sweet x
This song is seriously amazing!! I can’t believe you wrote that too ur voice is out of this world WOW!
Thank you so much Xx
OMG! What a beautiful voice you have! I'm blown away.
Thank you @luzcypher means alot x
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I would like to invite you to our discord group https://discord.gg/vDPAFqb.
When you are there send me a message if you get lost! (My Discord name is the same as here on Steemit)
@dante31 okay i'll come and say hi :)
Nice. How long have you been singing for?
Thank you :) I've been singing since i was 5
Beautiful song and maiden performance, Melissa! Really, really nice!
Thank you so much :)
a great poem to be able to do where our last day and our last breath with our loved ones
If you click onto the video you will hear the song it's not a poem :)
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Hey Melissa! you got a pretty voice :) keep up what you're doing.
Thank you @terranoise :)
good post! a very beautiful song! you have a fabulous voice! I warmly greet you! and I want more of your singing :)
aw thank you <3 glad you enjoyed it
I remember you showing me this for the first time. I really liked that intro, and I just felt like playing a couple of bars of it. I really missed you a lot, my friend. I hope to talk to you some time, and sing with you again.
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