Hello steemians
Here is my entry for steemit open mic week 74
This is one of my original songs and its called
'Shared so deeply'
I hope you enjoy.
Lyrics
You and I be walking down the same road.
So how can it be you be talking bad about me.
Its like you dont want a remember my name no.
Forget about the things we used share so deeply.
Chorus
Oeoee why you wonna forget all
about the things that
We used to share so deeply
Oeoee why you wonna forget all
about the things that
We used to share so deeply
The bottom of my heart
The love we felt before.
The feelings were so sweet.
The ever melody. The way you
Used to cry the days that dearly died.
Tatatatatata
Tatatatatata
(Chorus)
Now i dont want it back like it was.
But i think its a shame you would toss it away.
I aint proud of mistakes aint tryin to take the blame from the pain and the games we used to play.
Now you stand in my face.
I just dont know what to say...yeah
I just don't know what to say...yeah.
(chorus)
THE END
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Mooi, knap dat je dat zo kan verzinnen, een tekst is 1 ding maar dan ook nog de melodie. Cool ! succes X
Dankjewel. Ben blij dat je t mooi vind. En ja ik vind t gewoon leuk om te doen en als ik eenmaal bezig ben gaat t vaak vanzelf. Moet nog wel veel leren en oefenen vind ik zelf. Nogmaals bedankt.x
Ja dat heb ik ook met mijn creativiteit Bea dingen, een soort uitlaatklep. Je kan altijd groeien merk ik ook aan mezelf... Nooit gedacht dat ik een oude man zou kunnen tekenen hihi graag gedaan x
Wow very nice song. You really have talent. I hope you win. Keep doing what your doing. And you got yourself a new fan😎
Than k you so much for your nice comment.and I am happy you like my music. I will do my best to keep it up indeed.👍
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I am most thankfull for your upvote. Happy to read you like my work and I will surely keep it up and do better every day.
Not bad.
Much thanks..very happy you like it.