Hello guys,
My entry for this week's openmic(69) is an original song called 'One clean mind'.
It's one of the first and oldest songs we've ever played in Noria, my band, and was originally arranged and performed together with them.
I wrote it about ten years ago and always imagined it as kind of a dialogue between two characters that live inside one's mind.
The song didn't always have the chorus part, and we used to play it like that for about a year, until the chorus part was written.
Have a beautiful week.
yours,
Nir
One clean mind/
You are a pearl
living on dry land
A different mind
in this stream
The animals around you,
they are scared
they're cutting out the sounds
cutting out the sense
No, don't get me wrong
I wanted to stay
but I cannot take it anymore
Not when you're there
under my skin
I'm so saturated of you
Take me away
far from the madness
to another land
where I'm safe
Their double reactions
when I ask questions
It's freaking me out,
freaking me out!
No, don't get me wrong
I wanted to stay
but I cannot take it anymore
Not when you're there
under my skin
I'm so saturated of you
Give me a rest
one clean mind
Just give me a rest
one clean mind
No, don't get me wrong
I wanted to stay
but I cannot take it anymore
Not when you're there
under my skin
I'm so saturated of you
.
One clean mind by Noria
©2008 Noria
I could listen to you for hours! your lyrics always cut through and i love your voice.
Thank you, dear @soundlegion! <3
Thank you, dear @pixresteemer!
Very nice song and have a great voice enjoyed your post and song.
Thank you @steave!
Thank you, @Luzcypher! :)
Loved this, Nir! "Don't get me wrong", this is "freaking me out" - "I'm saturated", man - for sure!
"the animals around you - they are scared" ... Loved that line...
Really nice entry, brother!
Thank you so much, @passion-ground! It means a lot, as always.
Have a nice week, brother
Thank you, dear @pixresteemer!