Steemit Open Mic Week 114: Original "Don't Take the Kids" - rhY

in #openmic6 years ago

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I'm not allowed to see my kids. Or even send presents.

Yesterday was my daughter Grace Jean's Birthday. She turned 5. I had a show at 1st Street Bar in Encinitas. She's in another state on a military base with her mother and Navy Guy #4.

It's hard to perform this song, as I'm frequently on the verge of crying. There. You've been warned.

If you like it, or want to hear me sing when I'm NOT fighting back tears:

http://rhymusic.com

<3 Steemit Fam.

Oh and PS. Let's do something about Parental Alienation and our corrupt family court system, can we?

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You did make me cry. I am so sorry that you are not spending her birthday with your daughter.

Omg, this is so beautiful! I would like to see the lyrics? what a sentimental perfomance :( A big hug to you <3

What's left of our old home is awful dirty
Everything inside is always hurting
The truck will pull right up, I'll be forced to give them up
Then they'll drive away and I'll be awfully lonely

It's Christmas time, I hardly recognize them
And all the clothes I bought are the wrong sizes
There's a new one on the way, so I guess he's here to stay
Nothing left of us but some old pictures.

Don't take the kids, I've been a good dad
You don't love me, but I'm not all bad
I know it's easier down here with your friends and family near
You've got your new boy: don't take the kids

He's young man now and hates me cuz I wasn't there
But we were once so close when I had hair
I fed them everyday, and taught them games to play
But now there's someone else who's always there.

Repeat chorus twice

Ah man this is a beautiful and sad song. It is hard to believe that there is anything worse in the world than keeping a parent who wants to be a part of their kids' life forceably apart. That this can happen in situations where there was no abuse / criminal behavior is mind blowing. Sending you all the love. I honestly don't know what I would do if this happened to me and I couldn't see or interact with my sons. Big hug

Yeah, that this is even possible is a condemnation of our entire civilization. It's so unfair to the kids.


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