OpenMic Songwriters Challenge Week 5 - See you on that windswept shore

in #openmic7 years ago

Steemies,
I can no longer hide away from creating something to share here. In fact, that's even what this song is about.

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This competition has inspired me to write about how I am feeling right now, record it and share it right away without worrying. Its actually a really nice way to create something, because it gives you a starting point and there's no time to overthink it. I think I really needed this challenge, and I would like to thank @basilmarples for encouraging me to take part. And thanks to the wonderful people running these openmic pages. (Also thank you Luke and co.)

So, before I have even introduced myself, here is my first proper steemit post (besides those memes and a poem that I tried to delete!) :

Lyrics:

I'm cut off from the force
It's safer away from my mistakes
Dont let me see life get away from me
The day will come to ask for more

I'll see you on that windswept shore
I will dare to ask for more
Don't take it away from me this time
The crashing wave will be mine

You haven't heard me yet
It's all still stuck in my head
Feel it all around
Ready to make a sound

I'll see you on that windswept shore
I will dare to ask for more
Don't take it away from me this time
The crashing wave will be mine
The crashing wave will be mine

...Alrighty, thats about it from me.
See ya on the flippy

Sazzler J xoxo

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oh my god this is so beautiful., you have a great voice mam.,

:-) i really appreciate your reply, thank you xo

Postingan yang sangat bagus.. 👍👍👍

THAT is what Im taaaalking about!
Missed you steemit has Sazzler J Skywalker xx
(and it didn't even know what it was missing yet!)

I'm impressed

Thanks Mister.

I follow back

That is beautiful music

Ah thank you :-)
ps. loving your flipflop post xo

What a beautiful composition and maiden entry! Thank you, and Welcome!

Hehe man its great to have such a nice reply. Bring on week 6 !

Welcome and thanks for entering.

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oh my, this voice ! <3

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