Oh boy, it's been a long week.
I was determined to get this song into this week's Challenge though. So after work, I paid a visit to an old baby-grand piano.
The theme was Right Place/ Right Time. I chose Right Place.
After a few takes, I decided to just go with the one that I connected to emotionally at the time. I am so grateful to have a home. It is a special place. I dedicate this song to B, for a billion reasons it wouldn't be home without you.
Here is the song I finished writing today:
LYRICS:
A younger me made mistakes
But you forgave, so I could forgive myself
And honestly, I don't know
Where I would be without your help
Maybe I would never find
My right place
My right place
Home. Home. Better than I dreamed it
Oh so simple to live and let live
And your bravery made black and white into grey
And without it
Maybe we would never find
Our right place
Our right place
Home. Home. Better than we dreamed it
An older me will always know
The hand that I was dealt was on show
It took a while but I found my way home
With your help
Now I know I did find
My right place
My right place
Home. Home. It's better than I dreamed it
Home.
....Thanks so much,
See ya Flimpzidez
Sazzler J xoxo
You have such an angelic voice @sazzler.. Feeling you here. Much love from Africa.
Thankyou!! And much love back to you in Africa!! A dream of mine is to visit Africa and meet Elephants one day... <3 xoxo
Sazzy, would you be okay with me covering this song of yours for the Steemit community? I love the lyrics and although the vocal part is challenging for me, I want to give it a try. All SBD to you and so on ...you know the drill ;))
Go for it hunnie! x
Wow! I'm blown away by this song and performance! What a voice and talent you have.
Don't worry, I got you in the post and contest. Hope to hear more from you soon and thanks for sharing the music.
Thank you SO much! Its like being a baby having candy stolen away from you... and thEN HAVING IT GIVEN BACK! Yay. Thanks dude, you were already a legend before you did this. Haha <3
Really nice entry, @sazzler! Loved it!
Aw thanks dude, it means a lot!
Wasn't that just so brilliant? I love your humour too. I mean, it doesn't fail to show :-)
Thanks dude thats the best comment! It made me happy to know. :-)
Beautiful voice wow. Yu need to go on a talent show .
Haha maybe Steemit should host one.
..they could call it S-Factor
Such a good one, your voice is awesome! Please check our entry, hope you like it too, lots of love https://steemit.com/openmic/@brendahcaroline/5kpfbp-steemit-open-mic-week-67-good-things-come-with-time-la-nina-ingravida-original-song
good song, I love this song, you look beautiful 😁😁😁
I think you should officially record this and release its beautiful
Awesome playing and singing. loved every minute of this.
Good performance with cool voice. Can't wait to hear more of your songs. And am following you now
Really cool song and a great voice! I've learned a little piano myself and nothing is more beautiful than singing and piano together. Keep up the good work and hope to see more of you on Steemit
@sazzler Love the song. Amazing what you do -xxx-
Thank you @lissheartzz ! :-)
I am so glad I found this video! I love seeing so many singer-songwriters in this community! Your song hits "Home" for me and I am glad I stumbled upon it! Keep up the good work and I can't wait to here more songs from you!
Much Love,
-Julian
That's awesome, thanks for leaving a comment!
@sazzler I like the aura of sincerity in the performance, you are obviously sincere and emotionally adept, keep growing what you are 👍 you'r still one of my favorites on Steemit
Wow, thanks so much. Encouragement and feedback like yours means a lot to me. Here's to growing!
Great voice and great song dear...angelic
Such a lovely song and you sang your heart out with this performance. Beautiful love ballad and Arnold in the background there made my day ;) x
Hehe yes, where would we be without Arnie? xo
wonderful music..loved it
Thankyou @catemenia :-) :-)
How can I become a international saxophonist Singer?
Hmmm. I have been considering this question. I think just keep doing what you love. We 'become' what we do, so just keep going. Its about you and the music. xo
Great thanks