Lyrics:
Life can put love to the test
Strugglin' to hold on through the struggles, nothing less
Communication problems tend to build up, stress
Sit back and listen while I get this off my chest
And I feel like, I gotta draw the line
If you never crossed it then I wouldn't have found it in time
And I feel like, you came into my life
To teach me when to leave at the right place and right time
And I feel like, I gotta draw the line
If you never crossed it then I wouldn't have found it in time
And I feel like, you came into my life
To teach me when to leave at the right place and right time
Its not like me, to get up and leave
but you leave me no choice, I gotta let it be
Communication problems tend to build up, stress
Sit back and listen while I get this off my chest
And I feel like, I gotta draw the line
If you never crossed it then I wouldn't have found it in time
And I feel like, you came into my life
To teach me when to leave at the right place and right time
And I feel like, I gotta draw the line
If you never crossed it then I wouldn't have found it in time
And I feel like, you came into my life
To teach me when to leave at the right place and right time
There were two now theres only one
I need to find a place for my heart to rest on its own, on its own
And I feel like, I gotta draw the line
If you never crossed it then I wouldn't have found it in time
And I feel like, you came into my life
To teach me when to leave at the right place and right time
And I feel like, I gotta draw the line
If you never crossed it then I wouldn't have found it in time
And I feel like, you came into my life
To teach me when to leave at the right place and right time
This is an entry in the #OpenMic Songwriter's Challenge. You can find this week's contest post below. We're writing a song every week for eight weeks, after which @meno will award the grand prize of a brand new guitar to one lucky and skilled songwriter.
Vote here: https://steemit.com/openmic/@luzcypher/open-mic-songwriters-challenge-week-7-right-place-and-or-right-time
this is great! I love the way you change the pace of your lyrics to work your poetry in. You've got great control !
This is a perfect community for your guy to be on! Great exposure in the open mic :)
Thanks Vincent! And definitely and it will help him stay active and practice too! Thanks for the heads up
Wow, Steve. Great entry, man! Love the lyrics, melody, guitar - everything... Really good capture of this weeks theme, brother! Awesome job!
Thank you @passion-ground ! Really appreciate the listen! We have more original content on our Dtube and more to come!
You sound good. Hope to hear more from you soon.
You have a really good voice.
Thank you @luzcypher definitely will be participating in future openmics!
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Great job man! Kinda sounds like an acoustic version of a pop song, I can imagine it having a catchy beat! xo
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