Hi guys,
Here's my submission for week 70 of the Steemit Open Mic.
This week, for the first time ever, I actually managed a one-take-wonder.. although I did make a bit of a blooper near the end.. I hope you enjoy the song, and can't wait to hear what you guys have submitted this week too! Enjoy :)
Lyrics:
Oh, I'd do anything,
To see that pretty face again,
To see your beautiful smile just one more time.
Been thinking how it could have been,
If ever we were more than friends,
If ever I were yours and you were mine.
Bursting with ambition,
You left this town for brighter skies,
Searching far and wide for a better life.
If only I could tell you,
All the things that you should know,
Maybe you would find your way back home.
'Cause you're still pulling on my heart strings,
Darling, you're the best thing,
That ever came my way, my love.
And I'm still holding onto something,
Hoping you'll come running,
Waiting for the day you'll come back home.
And I hope you realise,
We never really said goodbye,
And darling, now you're gone it's so surreal.
I'd like to take you by surprise,
And look into those bright blue eyes,
And say exactly how you make me feel.
Bursting with ambition,
You left this town for brighter skies,
Searching far and wide for a better life.
If only I could tell you,
All the things that you should know,
Maybe you would find your way back home.
'Cause you're still pulling on my heart strings,
Darling, you're the best thing,
That ever came my way, my love.
And I'm still holding onto something,
Hoping you'll come running,
Waiting for the day you'll come back home.
'Cause you're still pulling on my heart strings,
Darling, you're the best thing,
That ever came my way, my love.
And I'm still holding onto something,
Hoping you'll come running,
Waiting for the day, oh lord.
'Cause you're still pulling on my heart strings,
Darling, you're the best thing,
That ever came my way, my love.
And I'm still holding onto something,
Hoping you'll come running,
Waiting for the day you'll come back home.
Peace, love, music, crypto.
Tom
That was an awesome track, Tom! Ha! Even though the head of your guitar smacked the ceiling, it did so right on the downbeat! : -)
Cheers, @passion-ground!
As Bob Ross would say - it was a 'happy little accident'..
This guy stole your performance and tried to claim it as their own. They are banned from Open Mic.
https://steemit.com/openmic/@voteiscrazy/steemit-openmic-week-70-heart-string-original-tom-ash
I see.. That's not very respectful.. Thanks for the heads-up, luzcypher!
Good song.
I' confused. Isn't this you?
https://steemit.com/openmic/@hanlovello/steemit-open-mic-week-69-let-her-go-cover-passenger
Hi @luzcypher, yes I migrated from @hanlovello because I wanted to use my music name for the account :)
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your coming in and turning heads my friend! great great job
Cheers, @soundlegion, thanks for the honourable mention!! :D