Steemit Open Mic Week 73 - La Torcaza (Original song)

[vera.carla]

Hello, everyone!

Today's entry is for the @openmic week #73 ♥

Thanks @luzcypher, @krystle, @verbal-d, @passion-ground, @pfunk, @isaria AND @meno (Congratulations!) for what you do with this contest, motivating us to share our music with the community! 😍

I wrote this song while I was watching a pigeon teaching its squab how to fly for the first time and I had this idea of pigeons flying around while I sung, so I decided to play a little bit with video effects... hahaha, I hope you enjoy it and don't think I'm too crazy... 😜

Lyrics "La Torcaza"/'The Pigeon'

Lejos de mi casa / Far from my house
Vuela una torcaza / Lives a pigeon
Va sanando mi canción / My song's healing
Sangran las heridas / The wounds bleed
Y con ellas vivo / And I live with them
Pienso desde que nací / I think, since I was born
Que soy mi voz / That I'm my voice
Que soy mi voz / That I'm my voice

Grita mi guitarra / My guitar screams
Siente su madera / Its wood feels
Todo lo que siento yo / Everything I feel
Por más que lo intente / No matter how hard I try
Pierdo referente / I lose reference
Sigo administrando amor / I keep managing love
No soy mi voz / I'm not my voice
No soy mi voz / I'm not my voice

¿Cuántas notas hoy serán / How many notes will today be
las que me acompañen? / joining me?
Sigo el pulso al caminar / I path to the pulse
¿Por dónde andaré? / Where will I be?

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Love to you all!

Comments

[andybets]

This is an amazingly beautiful song!

[abh12345]

Thank you for resteeming this Andy, I am in total agreement and this sent shivers down my spine this morning. Beautiful!

[vera.carla]

Oh, really? 🤗 These comments make me so happy 😊😊😊

[vera.carla]

Hey!! Thanks so much for resteeming 💜 😁

[andybets]

My pleasure - I love it, and need to listen to more of your music, and your band! :)

[vera.carla]

Hey!! I don't have much recorded as a soloist, but you can listen here to my band 'Olvidé San Telmo'. This is the last album:

Hope you enjoy it ♥

[carlgnash]

Simply gorgeous. I am in love with your voice, so effortless and clear. Cheers - Carl

[vera.carla]

♥♥♥ Thank you so much!!!

[miguelarl]

Me encantó la edición del video, en serioooo jajajaj La guitarra, la melodía, qué bonito todo!!

[vera.carla]

Jajajaja, me divertí mucho haciéndolo!!! Qué bueno que te haya gustado! Gracias de corazón!

[mrgranville]

Nice song really like the tranqility.
you play it very nice.
Thanx for adding the translation with the song.

[vera.carla]

Thank you so much! ♥ I'm honestly glad you enjoyed it!! :)

[itinerantartist]

que bien!!! eres hermosa - - absolutely beautiful song! your voice is incredible:) and loved the special effects!!! haha i was so entertained by them :)

[vera.carla]

Thank you so much!! 💜💜😊😊

[meno]

este tema es tan lindo Carla... es hasta un poco criminal lo lindo que es...

[vera.carla]

😍😍 gracias @meno!!!!

[chbartist]

Me gusto mucho tu cancion Carla... hermosa!

[vera.carla]

Muchas gracias @chbartist! 😊 Me alegra saberlo!!

[shamim07]

nice lyrics

[vera.carla]

thanks!

[matiasmenarguez]

jajaj fumanchuliiiiii, me gusto!

[vera.carla]

😂😂 Gracias Matuch!

[passion-ground]

I love this, Carla! The video effects were simply icing on the cake. Great composition and performance, girlfriend!

[vera.carla]

I ♥ YOU! Your feedbacks are such caress for my soul!!!! :D

[mrbloom]

Beautiful playing and vocals!

[vera.carla]

Thanks!! :)

[operahoser]

This is so very nice! I want to vote twice!

[vera.carla]

♥♥ Thank you!!!

[pechichemena]

Lindo tema carluki... Pero faltan mas pajaros! Jajajaj :p

[vera.carla]

Jajaj sí, pensé lo mismo, pero los que me quedaban se me volaron!

[abh12345]

Just beautiful!

Your voice is wonderful and I thank you so much for sharing it with us!

[vera.carla]

Oh, thank you 💚 You're nice! So glad you liked it!!

[abh12345]

I absolutely loved it.

Your voice and performance sent tingles down my spine, which is a clear indication of how much I enjoyed listening to you.

Thank you!

[vera.carla]

OOOOOOOOOOOOH, I'm about to freak out here!!! Thank you for so much love ♥♥

[verbal-d]

I mention you in my judge's top list for week 73.
Check this to read the full
review hereLuring lullaby performance @vera.carla

https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/steemit-s-official-open-mic-judge-verbal-d-s-top-5-entries-for-week-73-original-blog

[vera.carla]

♥♥♥ Thank you so much!!!!

[luzcypher]

Muy linda!

[vera.carla]

Gracias ☺

[yogajill]

What a beautiful artful song @vera.carla! Your guitar and voice sound so pure and peaceful. I enjoyed listening 💖

Best of Luck in the contest!

Thank-you for resteeming @abh12345 😊

[vera.carla]

Thank you so much!! ♥♥ And thanks @abh12345!!! 😊

[soundlegion]

vera.carla you nailed them notes. wow what a beautiful tone to your voice clarity and quality loved the whistlin. lovely song. talent alert love the little butterflies at the end on the guitar nice edit

[vera.carla]

Hey @soundlegion! Thank you so much!!! ♥ I had fun editing the video hahah :)