STEEMIT OPEN MIC WEEK 69 - JALAN PANJANG (ORIGINAL SONG)

in #openmic7 years ago (edited)

Hello guys!
Meet again on steemit #openmic contest, this week I want to entry my original song. Actually this song I want to enter into songwriter challenge week 7, but there was a problem during the making so it is not possible to enter it.

This song tells of the separation of a person with the person he loves.

Special thanks for @luzcypher and @pfunk for making this awesome contest.

Enjoy it!

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INDONESIA
Lyrics :

Jalan Panjang

Verse :
Jalan panjang yang kita lewati
Adalah jalan yang penuh dengan kenangan
Terhubung oleh amarah dan ego
Yang tak pernah habis diselesaikan

Dalam ruang dan waktu yang berbeda
Ketika kebersamaan menjadi langka
Jarak kita semakin terbentang
Akankah semuanya kan jadi terkenang

Pre-chorus :
Kenangan indah bersamu
Takkan pudar
Walaupun kita kan berpisah
Selama-lamanya

Chorus :
Siapapun yang kau katakan
Takkan pernah bisa melumpuhkan hati ini
Apapun yang kau perbuat
Aku takkan menyerah kepada dirimu

(Kembali ke pre-chorus)

ENGLISH
Lyrics :

The Long Road

Verse:
The long road we pass
Is a path full of memories
Connected by anger and ego
The never-ending finish

In different space and time
When togetherness becomes scarce
Our distance is growing
Will it all be remembered

Pre-chorus:
Wonderful memories come together
It will not fade
Even though we are separated
Forever

Chorus:
Whoever you say
Can never paralyze this heart
Whatever you do
I will not surrender to you

(Back to pre-chorus)

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