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yes...Thanks for your proper judgement......I am happy now....And please let me know what should I not do in future? That I can be previously be careful....

Cover something someone is interested in.
Spell and grammar check it in the language it is published.

I didn't spend much time on it, but it looked like a respin of 100 other news stories.

Anyway, wanted you to know I looked.

I understand why someone's interest is important here. Yes its a mandatory thing...

Ha ha! I spend a lot of time there....But didn’t see other stories.....May be those are better tthan me....

My targeted customer was ocd.....But I failed to draw an attention to him.....

Ha ha.....Usually I am not writing for a long time.....I wanted to check my ability......It was the first step....And you know brother, writing is definitely not an easy thing....But alright learned a new thing...