I too liked it...
I'm curious; when you are writing, do you listen to music?
From your post:
Going to the kitchen, she poured water from the cold water tap. It was far from cold. She shut the faucet off. It dripped in a steady, relentless "ping, ping" into the worn basin, the water stain in a rorsach shape was growing like an embolism on the once white porcelain.
Love this ... there have been many analogies in life... this hits perfectly especially I suppose, if this story not only does that..." tells a story", but portrays a moment in your own actual life...
Bravo... look forward to more...
Thank you very much for the wonderful comment. I did listen to a steemit artist prior to writing, but usually I do not. I'm glad this piece resonates with you.
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