My persuasive Essay . Any Comments or response?!
Give no more birth
Human beings are social creatures, who indeed need each other to survive. They live together to neutralize their demands and necessities. In the beginning, as we all know, there were just the Adam and the Eve. They were complementing each other sexually, doing camaraderie, feeding, and protecting. They felt a little bit lonely, so they decided to bear children just to make life sweeter. Not only too far, they gave birth to two sons and two daughters. This seemed a good option and amazing fortune to be able to reproduce new generations. They thought they can be more in contact with con gender, more in peace, and finally more in happiness. After a while, devil things started and all those nice dreams were no more than a mirage. Two sons of them quarreled and for the first time, a murder was committed. The murderer started producing a devil generation. From that time, generation after generation was produced and human being were growing in number.
As the human being was growing, they required more area of land to live, so they dominated more land. This domination was like an enlarging circle; in the middle of this circle, there was a bulletin board on which was written the first necessities of human, the reason for giving birth, way of living, and how to worship the god. As it enlarged and enlarged, “things fall apart, the center cannot hold”, And the circle was broken. Borders were appeared and that was a big separation between humanity. Since there was no center with a bulletin board, they had no description of human life and the reason they are living and giving birth. They started to write a new one and every separated colony wrote one different from others. Whenever they encountered each other, they negotiated the written paper they wrote for their fate. Since they had different statements, they derided or even fought each other because of the colony they had ( racism), the way they were worshiping the god( religious war), or way of living ( cultural preference). The prior peace is not come back yet. These all faults are just because of the first giving birth.
Let’s think if the first giving birth was not done. Adam and Eve were indeed a little bit alone, but they would live a calm life full of happiness and love, and finally they would fade away. Then, no mother would see her child is killed, no sister would mourn for brother’s corpse, no father would see his children in hunger while can’t do anything, no one would suicide him/herself because of the worlds’ cruelty, not kind heart would weep for humans’ madness, no sagacious would burn in humans’ tommyrot, no lover would be acrimonious from darling’s separation, no children will see her or his mother and father suffering from a disease and dissolving every day, no orphan would cry for a hand to be supported, no poor would agonize for a mouthful of dirty food, and no greedy rich man would envy others who are richer. If we stop giving birth, there will be no crying, no suicide attacks, no death, no bad news, no diseases, no war, no dysgenic, no hunger, and finally no devil.
Obviously, there are claims that it’s our right to live, to have peace, to be happy, and to breed. Living is surely your right also happiness, but I may ask some questions. How old are you? How secure you think you are? How many years you are sure you will live? How disgusting it would be for your mother, wife or children if you die? How should your children survive among these ambushed wolves? No one is eternal here, we will all have a day for valediction. Be honest to yourself, if you spend ten days in a month in fully happiness without any danger, any sorrow, and any anguish, then go and breed though ten days a month is only one-third of your life, and two-third of your children’s life and yours are spent in sorrow. Otherwise, let’s stop this cruelty, this darkness, and this aberrance. Let’s stop the wars, and let’s give no more birth. within 60 coming years, all these phenomenons will be solved
well done !
Wonderful and philosophical essay .
I think stop producing of children means killing the new generation in advance .
World is a good place only devil politicians make it sever for humans .
Nowadays, only economical war is in progress and being getting sacrifice innocents all around world . whole massacre and making the world improper place only for poor people . In reality cruel slaughter and destroying cities are for money matter only , and labeled racism or religion war . In Oder to say no to for modern slavery and violence; powerful countries should ignore capitalism system ( makes rich, richer and poor ,poorer ) .
They can follow communism system as China follows and this system is almost useful , and Islam has a wonderful economical system for live in tranquility as well .
Why only 25 coutures are riche and live in peace and tranquility among 196 countries of the world ?
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