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RE: Jeepney Modernization Program in the Philippines

in #philippines7 years ago (edited)

This is a good Editorial piece, nicely written, and very timely as well.

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thank you sis! yes, i'm new here. thank you for your tips. very much appreciated! :)

Welcome sis :)