Looks interesting, but please take care with the text formatting. It looks like it has been copy-pasted from Word and it is notorious for poor formatting. And paragraph breaks too.
Thanks - upvoted. You may be interested in a new project I have started to help minnows further: Minnows Accelerator Project.
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