Catchy headline, but may I offer some constructive feedback. Try to keep your paragraphs a bit shorter to make the piece more readable, and maybe consider using headers.
Keep it up!
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Catchy headline, but may I offer some constructive feedback. Try to keep your paragraphs a bit shorter to make the piece more readable, and maybe consider using headers.
Keep it up!
This is one of the papers I wrote in college. Thanks : )
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Thank you my friend! Always looking to improve.