Nice try! My "poor" considerations:
- I don't like the colors, but I understand it's not an easy shoot. I think you need a bit of camera correction for the distortion.
- For me there is too much dark in the frame. Anyway... it seems When I come around video by Green Day :)
- I like this one very much. Only a little bit of dust over the lens.
- Nice proportion and crop. I think in this kind of shoot is mandatory to use camera correction for vertical lines.
- The last one for me is perfect.
Keep shooting! We'll wait for the next post :)
Thx a lot for your critic! Will make sure to keep it in mind. Take a look at the other pictures on my block, would love to hear your opinion.
I see you changed the second photo. This new one is much better!