Follow me and few more if you wanna see how I post that can help you in creating your own posts, that's how I learnt too.
Did the one's you followed teach you to create batch messages to copy/paste as a means of system gaming while decreasing your level of effort, and craftily composing in a way that seems unique for deceptive purposes?
Changing a few words here and there doesn't exactly change the fact that it's considered cheating. You can take this message as me being a jerk, or you can take it as constructive criticism that will help you achieve better results on the Steem blockchian. Good luck.