Great shot!! I would like to suggest a few tips!!
Try getting your audience more into your post but writing more about it! You could write about the color red or the flower!!
Ask your readers a few questions like do you like the color red? Have you ever seen this flower?
@nba05 Steemit's 13 Year Old blogger
I am really curious, you are 13 for real? This is pretty good advice @nba05, I try to wright more most of the time, but sometimes don't do as good. Sometimes I wonder if anyone even reads what I write, so thanks for taking your time to do that, and comment.
Well first of all yes I'm 13!! Here is my introduction for proof! Well I read them so you can count me!!
I appreciate that @nba05. I will try and do better with my writing.