You claimed she was the most beautiful girl in the world.
She didn't always believe you, but it made her smile each time you said it.
You'd tell her you didn't know how you got so lucky finding her.
You made her feel so special like the luckiest girl in the world.
So what was it like to be with most beautiful girl in the world?
What was it like to hold her hand after she nervously told you that you should.
What was it like to kiss her to be her first kiss?
What was it like for her to look at you like you were more beautiful than the stars on a clear night? You knew how much she loved the stars how beautiful they were to her.
What was it like to hold her?
What was it like to hold when you let the three words, "I love you" spill out of your mouth.
For her, the girl you said most beautiful girl in the world, it was perfect she replays that day in her mind over and over again.
She is always replaying the way it felt to kiss you, to hold your hand, to be in your arms and it felt like home.
She never told you that you felt like home,More like home than her own home, she regrets never telling you that.
So tell me, what was it like to be with the most beautiful girl in the world?
But, wait can you also tell me
WHAT WAS IT LIKE TO LOSE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL GIRL IN THE WORLD
*What was it like to tell her that you were getting yourself in too deep with a long distance relationship?
What was it like to miss her? Do you miss her?
What was it like to break the most girl in the world's heart? 💔 To tell her you love her and then leave her?
Can you tell me that?
What it was like to love the most beautiful girl in the world?
And To lose the most beautiful girl in the world?
And tell me, what is it like knowing that the most beautiful girl in the world is no longer your beautiful girl? 🖤
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Great
wow
Thankyou so much.
Very intense and I could feel the words! Good stuff @akareem!!
Thankyou so much for your support ..
The intensity and depth of each one of these rhetorical questions is what appeals the most to me. I love how you gradually describe a love blooming, and then it withering away with time, whilst paying attention to the slightest of details and gifting them with huge significance. I am certain everyone is able to find their own meaning in this poem and interpret it in their own unique way. To answer one question, to love the most beautiful girl in the world is... and that is my answer, no words can describe that amount of bliss. Thank you for sharing! :)
PS: I followed :) If you have some spare time and are interested, I have poetry on my blog too. :)
ohh really i'll sure visit your blog :)
thankyou so much for your sweet and kinds.. i'm glad you liked it..
So romantic ! Lucky girl but sad she is no more
closing my eyes as the willow leaves gently kiss the river, i can almost feel her hair softly grazing my chest.
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I'm Feeling this! Will be great if you wrote a follow up poem.... that answers this...
Yea I'll work on it and post soon.. thanks for your support ..
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STOPIt feels bad man, that's what it feels like. :(
Thanks for your support
good luck bro
Lovely poem, cleverly expressed.....
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Very nice!!!👌👌👌 you have a new follower!!
Thankyou
Such a nice heartfelt poetry! Very deep and lovely
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This is the feeling that you leave written.
Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful piece.
Thanks for your support
nice one
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STOPbeautiful poem...love it
beautifull girls
i upvote you plz do smae me
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