#poem : lonely in love

in #poem7 years ago (edited)

Make me feel alive

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universel universe
you know I am alone
not alone but lonely
to the tip of my bone

I feel empty
abandoned from life
you.. universe..
are full of living and existence
still,
I prefer keeping my distance

Everybody leaves
Everybody sees,
what is happening to the world
No more beliefs
Everybody's alone

Love @chloewij

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do you post poetry often? did you write this? Im looking for some fellow poets to fellowship with haha

I try to write some, but I'm used to writing in french so english is quite new to me.. Hoping that I will get better with time! But yes I wrote this poem (one of my very first in english), maybe you could have some tips for me haha, fellow :)