This is deep, powerful but sad at the same time. I think this one has to be my favorite stanza.
All the trees are gone and dead.
We chopped them all to feed his dread.
Tap tap tap goes hammer and nail.
Building another coffin.
WOW!!! I thought the word play here was fantastic. Especially the first two lines. I'm a sucker for metaphors and such, I know. lol.
Well, I'm glad you're a sucker for it and enjoyed it so much! I worked kind of hard on it and comments like this make my day! <3
Thank you for the lovely words!
It's really good @sammosk. I enjoy reading such pieces, it's time well spent. I know exactly what you are saying, It's hard work indeed. Looking forward to many such wonderful poems in the future.
lol
Heheheh!!!
Me too. It was beautiful