my love for you was so real
it was so strong
even stronger then steel
but the thing about our love
it was not real
i still feel you with me
but its just the memories
i never felt so hurt tell you left me
you told me you love me but love just tricked me.
another short poem for you my steemians friends i wanna tank you for all the support hope you enjoy and please leave a comment to let me know what you think ?
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thank you @cleansingpoetry just upvoted you there
Great! Sounds like a true life story
It is its based about my life i have another one posted yesterday heres the link https://steemit.com/poetry/@danimal/she-was-the-one-but-now-she-is-gone-poetry-from-the-heart let me know what you think about them and thanks for the comment @dlio
Amazing <3
Great Work <3 I'm Loving It.
thank you @duakhan for the support and i made another if you would like to read it heres a link https://steemit.com/poetry/@danimal/she-was-the-one-but-now-she-is-gone-poetry-from-the-heart feel free to resteem il do the same in return
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Great poem my friend. I am glad that you continue to share your raw emotions and experiences through poetry. Keep up the good work. God Bless. Peace and Love. Might want to include #poetsunited tag as well if you want to be included again :)
thank you @angelveselinov for the support and help will do since i started i cant stop my mind finally found away to release the pain and thats thanks to poetry #poetsunited do i tag it when i post the poem or is it ok if i post it in my comment since i posted it allready
Nice short poem, even if the subject isn't a happy one. Welcome to #poetsunited!
thank you @madevi
thank you