POEM FOR MY SOUL : positive changes

in #poem7 years ago (edited)

I tought I was happy then
holding your hand and watching the sunrise
I soon realised the sunrise was fake
and we were just laying on a dirty carpet in front of the tv
I had to move away from this lies
I had to ressurect myself
I saw a sun ray trough the key hole of our apartment doors
I stood up and opened the door to my new sunrise
I now am happy
now when I'm breathing the crisp morning air
while watching the sunrise of my new soul
from the other side of the trapped door

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Excellent poem!

Thank you Michelle :)

It is beautiful. When you write you should take the deepest thoughts you have and put them out then turn it into something it always turns out beautiful. I love the picture too

thank you so much ! :)