Love Poetry

in #poem7 years ago

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Love Poetry

Without you nothing's want to do can't happen can't handle myself.
Without you pretend of smile behind a lot of tearing inside!

Sometimes it very difficult to alive even a second It's killing me innocent of your face cuties of your behavior

Every second of your face behaved and out of control of your laugh touch my heart and wanna you so much I can't stand myself and can't control out of tears

Every second of my heart beat called you !
I can't forget you even a second

In the morning I want to see you when mine eyes open first and Fresh my face want to see you in the reflection of your image at the mirror when I won't found you I wanna end the day
Drinking water seeking your face at there !
I wanna see you everywhere !

You are not in my dream
You was always in my heart
A word came from a true heart isn't a dialogue
It's a lips of love ,,,

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I think your poem needs alot of editing, punctuation, and some grammatical help.

Great! well done. Like it. thank you

Great post!
Thanks for tasting the eden!

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