Hello my friends steemians!
Here is my poem #6, as a beginner. Finally, I was able to write again. I hope you like it. Cheers everybody!
You are in my imagination
Dancing slowly, glazing snow
I see happiness in your eyes
The smile of your heart's desire
You are my dreams, near and yet so far
You are every beat of my heart
You are in my creative mind
Beautifully turning my head around
You're voice is echoing repeatedly
Calling my name from the distant dawn
Coming in and out, sometimes weaken
Still the magic flurries beyond
Tell me something I didn't know
Something that can break my heart into
Break me, make me and pick me
Over the edge of your loneliness
The sacrifice of her beautiful heart
Is a treasure that all travelers want
But only the one truly deserve
Will join her in the rainbow cloud
She stand tall, but keeps her feet on the ground
Her humble kindness flow among the rest
The energy behind her positivity
Is the strong shield covering the humanity
Her innocence sometimes makes her unique
With her honest heart, the liars are around
While dragging her down, God is pulling her up
Good intention always win up high
She believe first in God, and then herself
If it is written, God permits
That all her dreams will come true...
Will he find the man of her dreams and join her journey?
This is beatiful, again full of your energy. I've never read your poems before but I have to say I really liked this one. This talks about your soul and I like what I'm seeing. Thank you.
Thank you for your kind words, mi amigo @dinaudic. I really appreciate you like it and see the energy within. Thank you also, for remembering my positive energy. Woohoojooooo!!. Yes, I put my heart and soul in everything I do. Muchas Gracias, my dear friend! :) See you around.
Beautiful poem @itsmechille 😃😃
Thank you dear @lhiealien. When are you singing again in Karaoke my dear? See you at #Steem Schools.
Nice poem buddy.
Thank you friend @rakitera.
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This is beautiful, just like you.
Thank you my dear @gingerup. Join us at #SteemSchools to learn more https://discordapp.com/invite/ymyb8CM.
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