There is an internal rhyme in your poem, and it's rhythmic, however the short paced verses makes it very easy to feel the emotions retching, I love your end rhymes too, this is beautiful
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There is an internal rhyme in your poem, and it's rhythmic, however the short paced verses makes it very easy to feel the emotions retching, I love your end rhymes too, this is beautiful