recently I come across a two year old #poetic style comment on a blog of one of my new favourites , the girl who commented may be around 15 when she wrote some of these #beautiful lines which brings the must needed #freshness to the #stressful lives we all are living
Heaven and Hell, is believed by the ones who have a broken shell . Of all the real things they could believe, They choose to believe the thing that could decieve. Heaven and Hell are here,not There.Goods and Sins are here , not There.
Think of your life,not afterlife, Be it good,Be it sin,live your life. Fiction is too good to be true, Heaven or hell has got no clue. We are matter,that doesn't matter, Just like the people's chatter.
We're doomed if we believe,For all the sins we can't leave. We're doomed if we don't believe, cause, we only live once,that would mean. I believe in God,But not in this odd. Cause this life is all we have, And we got no afterplans.
This short #poem has really touched my #life.Seriously, this lass will definetely become one of the greatest #philosopher ever exist on earth
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So nice of you dear
@dearasghar Thanks for your support
I really like this. Nice one
Thanks a lot
I think it's true. I totally agree with this girl, there is no limit to the fear of heaven or hell, you have to live. Excellent publication.
Unfortunately, we all are living in that fear in some way or another but what we need is to find the way out of that life
nice
Thanks
Nice
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STOPvery nice and heart touching poem
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