"A Desire for A Good Life"

in #poem2 years ago (edited)

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If you wanna shine inside some other space
If you wanna be the one who likes to grow
If you wanna know what is the best way to live
You gotta learn to dream with your heart

There's a better life I know
I can grow to be who I wanna be
With you to help me show the way

I know that we can do this
Together we'll stand strong
We're gonna shine like stars

Cause everything starts small
It's up to us how we grow and live a good life
All it takes is the strength that we have in each other
The love comes too

I'll be there for you, you be there for me too
Cause everything starts small and it's up to us how we grow
I'm gonna live a good life, with you by my side

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That is a very, very beautiful poem! Thank you very much for sharing it here on HIVE! Minor typo to correct in verse one of the last stanza: it should be 'there' instead of 'their'. Otherwise, so beautiful, gentle, and delicate! Sincere congratulations, all the best, much health, take care, stay safe, many blessings, and great peace your way! God bless you and keep up the amazing work here on HIVE! Keep on writing and publishing poetry!

P.S.: You just earned one more sturdy follower!

I'm really that you like my poem and also thanks for spotting the typo; I appreciate it

The Hive community has been very supportive of my work here. Following you as well, please stay active as well... Hive on!

Thank you very much for your kind comment! I am very grateful for it! I also publish my own poetry on my HIVE blog. Perhaps you will find it interesting! Thank you very much in advance for checking it out! HIVE on as well and all the best!