Original Poem / Quietly Confident

rainer-m-rilke (49)in #poem • 8 years ago

                                      the moon
          in competition with the streetlights
                         is quietly confident

8 years ago in #poem by rainer-m-rilke (49)

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blizzylizzy (25) 8 years ago

This is lovely. Almost like a haiku!

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rainer-m-rilke (49) 8 years ago

thank you! :)
I do enjoy writing Haiku's occasionally, but sometimes it feels too restricting to stick to the 5-7-5 format

blizzylizzy (25) 8 years ago

Agreed! A strict haiku format would have diminished this poem.

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