TRYING OUT SOMETHING NEW - "ME " (an original poetry)

in #poem7 years ago (edited)

As I mentioned this thing earlier that my followers will never be bored because they are going to see different shades of me every time they visit so here I am with something new that I've never tried before : poetry! I never knew how to rhyme or compose such meaningful poems that would really move the audience but I guess it's not that impossible.

Some past experiences with the same

My voice used to be soft and good at one time. Basically, people would like to hear and ask me to sing a song but recently, it has changed or maybe I think It has so I don't sing anymore. With rhyming, it's like starting with A,B,C.. since I've never experimented other than the childhood rhymes we used to have.

Now,

I'm going to begin my short, self made , First ever poem hoping that the audience will be a little amused and I'll get a little pat on my back for taking a step ahead.

LITTLE DESCRIPTION OF THE POEM

This poem has a special connect with "me" since I've been always blamed for the everything happening around. "Me" refers to every individual who has ever gone through self doubt, self criticism and guilt.

Without any further delay, let's get into it:

They said,"It was me who messed it up.
They made the choices of my life,
They decided with whom I should talk,
With whom I should not,
They taught me how to talk,
They taught me how to walk,
They taught me how to behave,
They taught me how to crave,
They decided my limitations,
They decided my propagation,
They planed my dreams,
They polished my soul with jelly creams,
They said I am not a good human,
I am the reason of trenched life's end,
Because I am not a good freind,
They said I am good for nothing,
I said I don't worth anything,
They said I am on a wrong path,
I said you did not walk on my path,
They said I am an idiot person,
Who is senseless, restless,
Moron and careless
Moreover they are frustrated,
Because I raised my voice against it,
When I tried, they laughed,
When I cried,they fart,
But yes do not forget one thing,
They said I am a looser,
A looser because I don't listen to them,
This is the reason,
They said, "it was me who messed it up.

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People, let that self doubt out and make peace with yourself. Let yourself free and see your own self doing miracles

If you loved this, I'd be glad If you upvote, resteem or follow me as a token of appreciation. This really boosts up my confidence and hence will power.

Thank you so much for reading!

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great lines written, keep posting more @ritikabindal

Sure and I love your stories especially the encounter with that NRI. Lovely posts @jyoti-thelight

A grate poem you posted, thank you for sharing. #voted and #followed.
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Beautiful poem and I can relate with the poem very much. :)
Keep it up. 😎

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Not a poem type...but keep it up...👍

@dazzy

Yeah it is more of rhyming words. Appreciate your comment!

Namasté

Very nice poetic expression...

Self doubt, self criticism, and guilt can prevent a person from achieving happiness and success in life...

I have struggled, and still struggle with these things myself.

Thank you for sharing this great expression! :-)

You really do appear to be multi-talented. I feel you will do great here.

Keep sharing and be patient and you will succeed! :-)

Thank you and I hope so too :)

Well articulated poem!
Feels great to try something new!
Keep steeming!

Yes, it does.

keep up the good work

Good poem, I always wanted to write poems but I can't get the rhythm right. Keep them poems coming .

Oh, you too can write some, go on and try.

wow, great start keep it up.

beautiful.

thanks buddy!