Melting Away (original poetic imagery by @SumatraNate)

in #poem7 years ago (edited)

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I can hold on to the hurt and the pain, or I can let it melt away.
Pain, you cannot fight against the warm spring breeze called Healing.
You are no match for the bright sun that shines down on you.
You try to hide on the tallest mountains,
But your frigid soul will melt away.
I seek restoration. I long for renewal. I labor against the cold.
Hope brings warmth deep in my soul.
Oh Pain, your time is gone. It's time to melt away!


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I see strength and power, I can feel the energy splendid from your poetry, I love poetry so much @sumatranate. but it is a bit difficult for me to write in English

Regards

Hey friend, thanks for the encouraging words. I have recently starting writing poetry. I have always enjoyed writing songs. I guess they are connected. Keep practicing and you will get better as writing in English. It is very challenging to learn how to use another langauge. You are doing a great job. Keep up the good work.

Pain stay away,its Monday.That's a new day,a new start to reach the highway!
Great poem my friend.I really enjoyed it!To be honest I read it twice.I really like those that talk about inner healing situations.

Glad that I can share with you about what is happening in my life. Thanks for reading the post twice.

Don't even mention it.Happy that I found your post!

Oh Pain, your time is gone. It's time to melt away!

Sounds like an actual (And useful) life mantra...

Glad to hear that the last line is useful. I always appreciate hearing how my writing impacts people. Have a great day and thanks for stopping by.

puisiyang indah, sebuah ungkapan perasaan perjuangan, melawan segenap masalah,selamat,,semoga anda selalu diberkahi

Trims! Saya harap anda diberkati juga.

Upvote yah.. :3

anda bukan sedang curhat kan,,,hi hi hi,,,
saya salut pada anda,. semoga ini hanya sebatas puisi, sebatas sastra, puisi anda penuh dengan ungkapan hati yang dalam...
semoga kita semua selalu kuat menghadapi dan menjalani hidup

Kalo dalam kuasa kita sendiri, tidak bisa mengahadapi hidup. Tapi dalam kuasa Tuhan tidak ada yang mustahil.

Diupvote yaa..

Sometime, we must know about word and word what somebody make it in poem. I know you has some mistery in this poem.

I am facing a lot of challenges in my life. I am not sharing about all of them, just how I feel I as work through them.

生活就像被强奸 如果不能抵抗 那就去享受它