If you were here father
I wouldn't have come across That fate
With your constant advice I would have done better
That's why I Long to see your arrival
Because seeing you would break my lonely state
Source:
Father I thought I would be totally fine
Even if you left
But I guess you are a part of me
A line of sweet water eyes cannot see
But hearts let it be felt
Source:
I guess I know why you believe in me
My heart can still feel it
You inspire me
Just know that I will still push it
Keep pushing till I hit and pass my limit
This is a shout out to all the dads in the world for all your care and please help your child to continue growing. We love you for all your effort in bringing us up.
Thank you
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This is a poignant poem, @toyosiartdiy! This line especially got to me:
Speaking from the voice of the father it could be the same, but even sadder message. I'm not suggesting you should change your poem. I'm saying that I think there is a lie that people believe when they tell themselves that their children won't notice they are gone, or it won't have a big impact on the child's life if the parent leaves.
Even if I left
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