"Adopt my flowers" poetry by @margaretwise. Entry for Friday Poeamchallenge.

in #poemchallenge7 years ago (edited)

Ordinary morning
The sun goes down to the room
The smell of coffee spreads around the house
Everything seems to be the same

Cartons, cartons everywhere
I miss one by one
Freshly brewed coffee
I look out of the window

I forgot
I forgot you
How could I forget about you
Burdened, sad I stand

I'm calling
Adopt my flowers
Take care of them
Love those delicate petals

Adopt my flowers
Let them not feel lonely
Let the singing delight them
A beautiful combination of soul

I'm looking for a person
Which in their hands to comfort them
moment after moment
hour by hour

My eyes met her
delicate, smiles, perfect
wants my flowers to adopt
I'm leaving my unique garden pleasures

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Wonderful poem, my dear friend!

Thank you so much friend. :)

Exceptional poem Margaret! I sense that you wrote it with deep intensity and feelings. I hope your day is filled with sunshine!

Yes, Let me tell you the story. You know we Have a big changes in our life. So true that is so many things around the house, So true that is beautiful outside. So true that I smelled the scent of good organic coffee but there is one think different : my hubby asked me what would you do with your flowers. I looked at him and my face totally changed. I went to the window and suddenly he said so let somebody adopt your flowers. At first I smiled but the thought remained in the head. Actually these are mine and his emotions. I hope you don't mind to share with you my feelings. It helps. Thank you my dear friend

No problem. Sharing emotions is good. Change is good, sometimes..... I'm thinking of moving. I would like to move to Sedona AZ. Have you decided what to do with your flowers? I hope your move is good for you.

Beautiful poem my dear! Lovely flowers

Fragrant peas I love these little delicate flowers especially at night when I could sit in my garden and enjoy free time. Thank you my love.

Anytime we leave something behind that we love, a piece of us remains with it. We lose a little piece of ourselves, but I believe it gives us room to grow, perhaps a little bit more in another direction, or to expand - perhaps a bit more.

A beautiful, heartfelt weaving of words.

May your day befilled with the sunshine that you spread so freely among others.

Upped and Steemed

So true my dear friend. Thank you for your kindly words. :-) have a wonderful day.

beautiful as always...

You are so kind like always 😊 Thank you

Always enjoying your poems beautifully written :)

Thank you my lovely frien. So good to hear that :-)) Have a wonderful weekend;-)

I like it 👍🏼 thanks for sharing

Thank you so much. Appreciate my friend ;))

your welcome :) thank you for following, I follow back :D

Thank you my friend. Welcome aboard:-))

Wonderful poem & fantastic photos Up&Resteem follow you

Oh !!! you are so kind. Thank you my friend :-)

You are welcome friend

Oh my, your poem perfectly captures how I felt when I had to leave my former home and my beautiful flower gardens. It is still hard to think about the years I spent creating those lovely flower gardens and the joy they brought me every day.

So it means that you felt exactly the same as I am right now. This poem is about my present feelings. Thank you so much for your support words mean a lot.

Beautifully written [email protected] & rs

My dear friend, how is your day? .

We are in the middle of the tornado in my house. Means huge mess and packing :-) Our big changes are coming. I will soon start posting about that. I hope everything is well with you and your wonderful family. Bless you

i am good...oh...God bless you... are you okay?

Tornado in my words Beans big big mess in my house. We are mibing my dear friend. So many things to do it. I am preparing to write a post but still no time. Thank you for everything my dear friend. Lots of love to your beautiful family :-)))

greeting from my family...i will wait your post...thank you for your love and support:)

that is a fantastic poem!!

Thank you very much:-)

Awesome poem with full love and hope
great entry :)
i resteem it

Thank you so much my flowers say thank you too ;)) Have a wonderful day full of inspirations :)))

done , i participate , my favorite poem by ilya abu madi:)

My dear friend thank you but I think you should read the rules which I wrote and I am sending you below. When you read the poemchallenge info then you would figure out that it needs to be your own poem connected with your photo. Appreciate for your work. I hope you understand:-) have a wonderful day.

And thank you for being honest I respect that a lot.

https://steemit.com/poemchallenge/@margaretwise/my-new-challenge-for-all-my-dear-steemians

Nice poem and nice flowers

Thank you my dear friend. Appreciate so much ;))

You are welcome

@margaretwise, everything about your post is so very beautiful! ❤️🌷

Thank you my dear. Have a full of beautiful moments day ;)))

Great writing and nice photography.

Thank you so much :-)

Your every poem is really heart touching... Thanks for sharing..

Thank you my dear friend. I am so appreciate:-)

@margaretwise,
Wow that's an amazing poem! Thank you very much for sharing with us! Really appreciate your effort!

Cheers~

Thank you for your kind words. You made my day. :-)

what a wonderful read this glorious Friday morning @margaretwise, have a great weekend!

Thank you my dear friend I am deeply appreciate:-)

Beautiful

Thank you :-)

you are welcome

@margaretwise - Ops that's a nice competition. Love your work Ma'm. Therefore, I wish to ReSteem your post.

+W+ [UpVoted & ReSteemed]

My dear friend like always thank so much. :))) Have a full of great moments day ;))

What a beautiful post with a wonderful poem and a gorgeous photo! Resteemed on my wall!
Have a great weekend, my friend!

Thank you so kindly my friend ;)) I am very busy these days. I try to focus during the night time. I don't know did I tell you but in front of us is a big change my dear friend. We moving, my house is one big mess. I will start posting soon but I would like to let you know that I am exited and a little bit scary. Thank you for reading and hope you don't mind ;))

WOW, you are moving and still posting! Guess you wouldn't read of me for weeks, if I were you, for I know how much work this is.
I wish you lots of success and courage and that everything will work as you wish it would!
Have a wonderful weekend, my dear friend! :)

Thank you my friend so appreciate of your very kind words. My life is really upside down. I don't even know to where put my hands. So much to do it. I hope we will figure out everything and solve all of the problem related to moving. Lots of love to both of you my dear friends ;)))

Very nice Post, dear Margaret :)

Thank you my friend. My heart is cheerful :-) have a beautiful day 🤗

Oh !!! thank you for resteem my post. A

Wow! Very beautiful feelings.You are so kind hearted, lovely feelings.Thanks for sharing, Happy steeming friend.

Thank you so much my lovely friend ;))) Appreciate so much ;))) Have a wonderful day ;)))

A beautiful, although it seems sad and nostalgic piece of writing. Very nice indeed. :)

I love your poem! Its wonderful! And the flowers are beautiful❤️

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Great post dear friend :)