She

in #poems7 years ago (edited)

I wrote this poem for Women's Day. This poem defines the physical beauty, charm, emotional strength and power of a woman. This is to all the amazing women. And all the men because we all have felt the warmth of womb, the sweetness of milk and magic of love…

Source : https://pixabay.com/en/gothic-fantasy-dark-woman-female-2910057/

Gentle feathers which soothe the skin,

High mountains and low lying valleys,

Serpents which move free,

Claws of a Predator,

Dry moist folds,

Walls break and red drips,

Emotions painted and thoughts portrayed,

It colours the walking pillars new,

Receive and give,

Plant a seed and be gifted with a tree,

Nuturing and caring,

Feeding and loving,

Like an elixir which drains itself,

She is a woman,

Creator of all, sailor of life, angel of heavens and wrecker of Hells…

-©Pratibha badgal AA

All the posts under the name Pratibha Badgal AA are my own.

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I love the part you said "we all have felt the warmth of womb"

I am glad you liked it @wak!!

As a new user to steemit it is very important to post a source for images that you use. Here is an example of a method to provide the source link.
https://steemit.com/beauty/@mindfreezer/gothic-fantasy-dark-woman-female-young-beauty
They used the same image as you but provided a source as to where it came from. No one likes others using their hard work to make money, and cheetah bot and steemcleaners see it as plagiarism when a source is not named. So always provide a source for material you use, even if it is your own work. When you have edited and provided the source let me know and I will come by and provide a 20% upvote.

Done. I am sorry basically I forgot to give credit while posting and thank u for your gentle reminder @bashadow.

Thank you, I enjoy the works of a lot of the photographers on steemit, and honestly feel that when a photo from someone is used they should be recognized. Voted, now off to the contest and a vote there as well.

Ya, you are right. Even I would feel the same way if it were my work. I will be more careful in future.