SOUL RUST

in #poetry7 years ago

background.jpg


Lonely reflections as I gaze in the waters,
A rippled figurine stares back.
Standing still as time streams by,
Piecing together the mind clutters.

Paint brush of goosebumps on skin,
Slow exhales of dense clouds.
Its a cold world out there,
Deep scars of the original sin.

It only takes forever to chase a shadow,
To stare into the face of the deep.
A moment of blink and tiring eyes,
A waiting thief steal bits of the soul.

There is still much to be done,
I reached too deep and lost myself.
What happens when you lose a soul,
I am left to a Cold abandon.
imgsource
banner.png
Thanks for reading, You can have a look at my poetry collection

DQmP3mL7sAPk3qBvCARHZCK8RzReNdkgz6hYBxmrxDC3u32_1680x8400.jpg

Sort:  

Upvoted on behalf of the dropahead Curation Team!

Thanks for following the rules.

DISCLAIMER: dropahead Curation Team does not necessarily share opinions expressed in this article, but find author's effort and/or contribution deserves better reward and visibility.

Help us giving you bigger upvotes by:

Upvote this comment!
Upvote the latest dropahead Daily Report!
Join the dropahead Curation Trail
to maximize your curation rewards!
Vote dropahead Witness with SteemConnect
Proxy vote dropahead Witness
with SteemConnect
Donate STEEM POWER to @dropahead
12.5SP, 25SP, 50SP, 100SP, 250SP, 500SP, 1000SP
Do the above and we'll have more STEEM POWER to give YOU bigger rewards next time!

News from dropahead: How to give back to the dropahead Project in 15 seconds or less

Brilliant piece. @abmakko.

Thanks for reading :-)

Congratulations! This post has been upvoted from the communal account, @minnowsupport, by abmakko from the Minnow Support Project. It's a witness project run by aggroed, ausbitbank, teamsteem, theprophet0, someguy123, neoxian, followbtcnews, and netuoso. The goal is to help Steemit grow by supporting Minnows. Please find us at the Peace, Abundance, and Liberty Network (PALnet) Discord Channel. It's a completely public and open space to all members of the Steemit community who voluntarily choose to be there.

If you would like to delegate to the Minnow Support Project you can do so by clicking on the following links: 50SP, 100SP, 250SP, 500SP, 1000SP, 5000SP.
Be sure to leave at least 50SP undelegated on your account.

This is amazing poetry! Great job! I like to take deep exhales... 😤

Yeah, it works good for meditation. thanks for reading :-)

This is another stimulating cryptic message @abmakko, thanks for sharing.

Thanks for reading my friend :-) am sure you got the message.

This is an awesome piece of prose, @abmakko! The lines,

It only takes forever to chase a shadow,
To stare into the face of the deep.

... were especially thought provoking. Beautifully done!

Thanks. The soul should be protected or else it rusts, am glad you enjoyed it :-)

You're very welcome! 😊

cool poem