Hello Steemians! The ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds series is designed to be a sort of platform for sharing some of my greatest works with @adsactly readers.
Many of the verses I've shared and continue to share were written in collaboration with a friend of mine.
Others were written as solo projects and some made their way to the recording booth.
I find that collaboration brings many benefits most of which revolve around having someone to bounce ideas off of and sort of be challenged to pick up where the other has left off.
I've got another special piece for @adsactly readers today, another powerful verse I wrote for a solo project.
I think it has a bunch of really cool concepts readers will connect with but as always I will leave that up to you to decide!
I'm Not at the End
Chorus:
After all...
I've thought it over...
And I'm not at the end.
Verse:
Now what's life without love and where does it come from?
The type of hate I see can only be dispelled so easily with a little bit of light but at a different point of time in his life his mind, his mindset was like...
Get over for a buck ain't got no money than ya out a luck cause what it would be cause what ya think it would be why must it have to be?
Cause it wouldn't mean much no it wouldn’t mean much or would it?
Exhibit 'B' in his state of being was always disbelieving a different way of life.
Might was right and the streets in which he roamed see those same streets he knew so well it felt like home.
Making all these moves with something left to prove always needing something illegal or legal to do...
With darkness shawdowing his life he didnt know what to do...
Sometimes we don't know why we chose the wrong path but looking back we can have a laugh… We got a long way to go.
Chorus
After all...
I've thought it over...
And I'm not at the end.
My Thoughts on This Verse
Some readers may find this verse scattered as well but I think compared to some of the previous work I've submitted, this verse is actually quite clear.
This verse promotes love as a central theme in a happy life.
It talks about overcoming darkness.
It pushes readers towards continuing forward as opposed to giving up.
The chorus makes a very powerful statement:
After all...
I've thought it over...
And I'm not at the end.
We've considered giving up but we firmly refuse to do so. This type of attitude can bring us a very long way!
We can literally create our own circumstances. I know things may seem impossible but there are possibilities we are simply not seeing right now.
We need to know what we want and we need to focus our energy towards getting it!
Anyways, I'd very much like to know your thoughts and feelings about this verse so if you liked it or didn't like it, I'd love to hear your opinion either way!
Authored by: Zentalk
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------# ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds (Part 9)
Hello Steemians! The ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds series is designed to be a sort of platform for sharing some of my greatest works with @adsactly readers.
Many of the verses I've shared and continue to share were written in collaboration with a friend of mine.
Others were written as solo projects and some made their way to the recording booth.
I find that collaboration brings many benefits most of which revolve around having someone to bounce ideas off of and sort of be challenged to pick up where the other has left off.
I've got another special piece for @adsactly readers today, another powerful verse I wrote for a solo project.
I think it has a bunch of really cool concepts readers will connect with but as always I will leave that up to you to decide!
I'm Not at the End
Chorus:
After all...
I've thought it over...
And I'm not at the end.
Verse:
Now what's life without love and where does it come from?
The type of hate I see can only be dispelled so easily with a little bit of light but at a different point of time in his life his mind, his mindset was like...
Get over for a buck ain't got no money than ya out a luck cause what it would be cause what ya think it would be why must it have to be?
Cause it wouldn't mean much no it wouldn’t mean much or would it?
Exhibit 'B' in his state of being was always disbelieving a different way of life.
Might was right and the streets in which he roamed see those same streets he knew so well it felt like home.
Making all these moves with something left to prove always needing something illegal or legal to do...
With darkness shawdowing his life he didnt know what to do...
Sometimes we don't know why we chose the wrong path but looking back we can have a laugh… We got a long way to go.
Chorus
After all...
I've thought it over...
And I'm not at the end.
My Thoughts on This Verse
Some readers may find this verse scattered as well but I think compared to some of the previous work I've submitted, this verse is actually quite clear.
This verse promotes love as a central theme in a happy life.
It talks about overcoming darkness.
It pushes readers towards continuing forward as opposed to giving up.
The chorus makes a very powerful statement:
After all...
I've thought it over...
And I'm not at the end.
We've considered giving up but we firmly refuse to do so. This type of attitude can bring us a very long way!
We can literally create our own circumstances. I know things may seem impossible but there are possibilities we are simply not seeing right now.
We need to know what we want and we need to focus our energy towards getting it!
Anyways, I'd very much like to know your thoughts and feelings about this verse so if you liked it or didn't like it, I'd love to hear your opinion either way!
Authored by: Zentalk
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The part I focused mostly is "Sometimes we don't know why we chose the wrong path but looking back we can have a laugh… We got a long way to go." I found myself on that.. I always think about my wrong paths I chose in my past. My wrong desicions, wrong actions anyway. In that time I am totally forgetting that I have still a long way.. I think I should learn how to turn my face to future..
the lyrics are poetry.
poetry is the soul of the sentence
sentence is physical from speech
speech is a pride
self-esteem becomes a person's value
when I read this publication I remembered that everything would go on in life. Everyone has a lifeline that he must live. We must not give up on the situation. Anything hard if we continue to struggle will arrive in time to reap success.
In the lyrics that the tone for sata sees as a unity of the principle of good life. when we have succeeded then we remember the past we can smile or laugh at the past.
Thank you @zentalk
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Hello, @zentalk. Interesting your thoughts in song mode. Actually, we're all "on the road," as Jack Kerouac titled his book. And as the poet Cavafys said, the important thing is the viale. In it we can stop to rest, look back to see the route, review the course and reorient if necessary, and so on. The darkness will always accompany us: it is part of the road and of us. Thank you for your post. Greetings.
Daring to live can leave scars and sometimes we hide them. Although we feel it is the end, there is always a little more. Even the floor has layers and deep holes. There's no problem with darkness or fear, it's not bad to be human. Human is synonymous with feeling, suffering. Sometimes it is difficult to describe what we feel, because feelings are labyrinths, puzzles, a pile of scraps. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, @zentalk.