Free time
Have you ever had that longing,
That desire to see and hear them,
That ache in your soul,
As you feel, you're no longer whole.
I had way to much free time on my hands,
It lead my mind off in a million directions;
One, thinking about my own imperfections
Another, about my missguided perceptions.
All I want is to see your smile,
And have you near for a while,
I want to talk to you face to face
Surrounded by your grace
I just want to be next to you
I'll do everything I can do,
But at the moment I feel as though I'm not what you need,
Todays spare time made my heart bleed.
I fell into the pit of dispair,
As I imagined nightmares,
I don't want to lose you,
Not now.
Not ever.
One day I'd like to be together.
By Ethan
2018/02/03
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Beautiful .. well done
I felt that .. yes that is .message delivered
Thank you for sharing your words with us.
heart touching words...
Love is not always beautiful, like a beautiful flower, surely one day the flower will wither.
and to avoid going back to ourselves, how we treat that love.
Very emotional. Nice job.
CORTA, REFRESCANTE, EXQUISITO AL PALADAR MENTAL DEL SENTIMIENTO
Not Now
Not Ever..
Love it <3
Touching ! Almost into tears ! What a poetry !
Quite poetic and got me thinking. Thanks for sharing
Write time is exam good and bad time are coming on every time
idle hands do the devil's work
podrías escribir menos expresando la misma intensidad. del resto bien. te seguiré. con gusto leeré tu proximo post
Good post dear
wow words that deeply touched my heart, an inspiration for me
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Great poetry
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Simply just awsome..keep up the good work dear..
very nice
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Wow beautiful poem, very intense
Great poetry...loved it
simple, short and straightforward. nice
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Excellent Poem, and no, I cannot fault your Grammar.
Nice @africaunited
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awww. In a relationship, there is always this someone who loves the most. If only everything is fair when it comes to relationship then I guess there will be no more hurting.
Great post that's how 99% of people think but thinking it does not make it true
Nice. I like your poetry.
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Beautiful!! I just thought it is not complete...but that is what I loved about it because you never know what is in store for you.
WOW THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!! This is so heart wrenching. Good job on this one! What a wonderful mind you have. I also love writing myself! Infact I've done a freewrite for the first time. I tried to do a single prompt under "crazy" and I hope you'll take time to read! I hope you'll leave a note so I could see how my writing went. See you around! 🤗
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Beautiful