Hostility of love

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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Love Hurts 


The pain doesn't go away

the tears never stop to fall,

You hide them over with laughter and smiles 

Hoping you'll want to break away

But It never leaves your way 

Because love hurts 



the hurt doesn't go away,

When love doesn't want to stay.

And inside your laughter

You feel one day you're gonna get over it 

But when you see your gone love

It comes again because that love hurts 




the tears doesn't go away 

The tears always roll of your eyes

The hurt doesn't go away.

The pain always  burns like fries 

Even  if that  pain goes away 

It would certainly come again 



But Keep on Hoping everyday 

Because love would come one day 

The pain and sorrow will go away 

And then that love would  heal

That love that  made you feel

That love burns and hurts

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Hello @ahmmartinz

Indeed love hurts. .. This is very poetic with much poetic flavour. You didn't only distill the mystery of love from a sad viewpoint. U have also brought to the fore, the happiness after finding love ...Beginning on a sad note and ending on a happy note brought the poet unique style of writing. Nicely written

Thanks also @peterwrites. Ya m so happy you enjoyed it

I love reading your poems, keep up the awesome work @ahmmartinz love hurts, as well as heals. Beautiful! Thank you for sharing!

Hey @charisma777 you're very welcome. Thanks for liking it... Watch out there are more coming out