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That's very perceptive - I don't know Merrill Glass but you're right, the same cadence, the same structure, the same use of a repeated line. Maybe it's the basic musical principles of language that we're both drawing upon. Thank you, for such a thoughtful comment,

Re: being on these channels, I really am swamped at the moment but if I find some time I will check them out. I really appreciate your response