You're always on point. Choosing the right words always. You established a lovely rhythm to the words , the stanzas seem to coil in on themselves-first going out and then coming back again. At least that was the sense I got while reading.
I am happy to make the comment and be part of the poem. That is satisfying in itself.
Thank you for genuine comments on the fine details of my style in this poem. It’s hard to do, and I spent many hours on this very short poem so I appreciate your observations, more than you know.
Thanks. ❤️