The Sunrise (Original Poem)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Traveling back from the dimensions of the dream state
My dream body fading, my mind not fully awake
With a flicker of movement I open my eyes
Looking past the curtain through the window to the sunrise

Not yet able to move, I feel the sun on my face
Its rays peaking and dancing through the curtain lace
As the minute in the moment slowly passes by
I hear the birds sing and I see the birds fly

Fully awaking, shaking off the paralysis of sleep
I take a breath of fresh air, breathing ever so deep
A stretch and a yawn, my hand finding the curtain
Pulling it back unapologetically, nothing uncertain

The night may have brought me tears
And even in my dreams, I have fears
But the night soon turns into light
And, in that, I know that I'm all right

Because with some things I know I must cut ties
It's no secret and it is no surprise
That all is well with my lonely cries
When I open my eyes and see the sunrise

By: Amarie


Hold on...it will be better in the morning.


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This is awesome poetry, I'm taking this one over to my page. Resteemed!

Thank you very much!

nice

Thank you. :)

Beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing

Thank you for visiting and reading.

very nice poem. It sounds nice and gives feelings of hope. It's true, everything feels better the next day.
I just wrote one poem yesterday if you'd like to check it out on my blog @raisinbran !

Thanks a lot!

Hi @raisinbran sorry for my late reply. Yes, you are right, it's something about seeing another day that often helps us feel better. Following you! I will check out your blog.

Thank you
I have followed you as well :)

Beautiful!

It's always a pleasure @robyneggs.

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