I don't know you anymore 💔

in #poetry8 years ago (edited)

Couple - broken relationship

I don't know you anymore (don’t want to be your Love)

I don’t know you anymore;
You are not the one from before!

I don’t want to be your love
and don’t call me honey!
I don’t want your rhymes;
I don’t need your money;
Leave me out of your fame
I don’t know you anymore
You are not the same!

Hiden Money

I don’t care about your chains,
and imprisoned passion.
Don’t care for your captured will
with desires lacking action.

Man in Chain

Don’t play to me "The Edelweiss,”
I don’t believe in your sacrifice.
Don’t mention me in your songs;
I’m sick of your weaknesses
had enough of your wrongs.

Playing The Edelweiss on Piano

It’s too late for apologies;
You’ve dumped down all the fires;
Behind time for explanations,
as you have cut all the wires.

Your last acts make me think
whether you could be cheaper;
Keep my mind wondering
could you fall any deeper!?

Woman on the beach walking away

I don’t know you anymore;
You are not the one from before.
And…
I don’t want to be your love
so don’t call me honey!
I don’t want your rhymes;
I don’t need your money!

Man Singing

Leave me out of your fame
I don’t know you anymore
You are not the same!

©️ Ana-Maria - All Rights Reserved

Posted on Steemit - Saturday, October 8, 2016


P.S.
This poem was written several months ago as the answer on lyrics for a newly published song of the certain band.


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I really enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing :)

Thank you a lot @bitcoingiveaway! 😊 - I must admit I hesitated a bit to publish it like this or not, as it's quite personal.

Nice job I can see how people could relate to this during a hard time. I followed you and up voted :D please consider following back! I write a lot of poetry myself!!!!

Thank you for the comment, upvote and the follow @jacobcards! 😊
I must say, I'm not into poetry too much or at least not anymore and for a long time, but this one, almost in a blink of an eye, poured out from me.

P.S.
I followed you back. 😉

God I was screaming every line of your poem in my head. Wow, you're excellent!

Thank you very much @jmt! - I can't express enough how much your comment means to me, first and foremost because I believe only the true words can convey to, provoke the emotion of and reach the reader. Secondly, as English is not my mother tongue, although this poem poured out of me for some to me still unknown reason in this language, your comment is almost like winning a Grammy! 😊

Tough Story, but sometimes the best Solace is to lay it out ,as you have. Beautifully written. Time heals all, I hope you can look back at this event in your life and shrug it off as you find new happiness.

Thank you, @awgbibb! You know how they say, the tough and/or sad ones are the best ones (at least for readers or listeners). 😉