maybe next time you can try and rearrange it so it sound more like a poem? i think it would be beautiful to read it and experiment it that way too :)
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maybe next time you can try and rearrange it so it sound more like a poem? i think it would be beautiful to read it and experiment it that way too :)
The thing is I purposefully didn't write it as a poem, I couldn't care less because this experience wasn't and inspiration, it was an eye opener.